They're so
wonderful...
Lots of people say they never change into something real,
but I have to say that this is not true.
Everything depends on the moment, and all good things in our lives,
also bads, come,when they have to come:
They return when we don't think they're going to appear again.
Sometimes we need to feel like the child we were,
because this is the only time in life we were really happy:
we lived the moment and, in seconds, we forgot what hurts.
Do you remember Christmas when you were little? Oh, it was incredible.
Leastways, I was always so delighted ... But then, when you grow up, all these kind of illusions
vanish and you get that all these stupid things that made you happy in the past are today your best memories.
Illusions... they usually last for a time that is only a second
and when you open your eyes and notice they aren't there anymore,
disappointments come back.
Therefore, we should live good moments in life without fears, we have to enjoy these short times of happiness because we'll have enough time for frustrations.
So... seize the day and seize the love !
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Thanks Moonlight Shadow!
I'm getting just slightly better but I'm really astonished how painful this illness of mine is.
This is a nice subjective text. Pay attention to my comments. Some of them, with a bit more of attention, I'm sure you could have avoided.
-and all good things in our lives,
also BAD ONES, (ADJECTIVES CANNOT BE PLURAL IN ENGLISH AND THEY CANNOT STAND ON ITS OWN)
-Leastways (IS AN INFORMAL WORD YOU CAN TRANSLATE AS "AT LEAST". IS IT THAT WHAT YOU MEAN?)
Read more in English. A little bit every day. It'll make your texts more natural. I know it's difficult to express abstract thoughts in English, thus your text sounds a bit unnatural but I cannot detect terrible mistakes. Do you see my point?
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